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Post by Elfhild on Jan 1, 2021 7:38:49 GMT
The site is back up and I uploaded new chapters. Hopefully it will stay up.
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Post by leyara on Jan 1, 2021 19:42:38 GMT
I was able to read the first chapter before the site went down again - I'll post again with my thoughts once I've read all three.
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Post by Elfhild on Jan 1, 2021 23:30:27 GMT
I miss the good old days of Geocities.
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Post by leyara on Jan 4, 2021 16:27:20 GMT
Oh my, Leofgifu's acquired quite a bit of power while the Twins were gone! I wonder if it has anything to do with Hunig's absence?
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Post by Elfhild on Jan 5, 2021 5:47:16 GMT
I predict a bit of drama with Leofgifu throughout this book.
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Post by leyara on Jan 14, 2021 3:49:32 GMT
Awww, Inbir and Aeffe! I want things to work out for them but I get the feeling it won't be easy.
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Post by Elfhild on Jan 17, 2021 7:49:28 GMT
I have added some additional dialog to the "Inbir and Aeffe" chapter. I felt that a mention should be made of the bruises on both their faces. Life in Mordor is hard indeed...
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Post by leyara on Jan 24, 2021 20:47:15 GMT
What an interesting group Elfhild and Elffled have found themselves in! I'm sure that Sunngifu in particular is going to stir up plenty of trouble with Tove and Cyneburh.
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Post by Elfhild on Feb 3, 2021 18:02:21 GMT
Trouble definitely awaits ALL the characters in the future.
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Post by leyara on Feb 10, 2021 3:32:35 GMT
I love the map! In particular I'm quite intrigued by the Dreadful Gorge and the Gap of Nurn. Most authors only work with the most northwestern segment of Mordor without expanding much further, so I'm really happy to see all the varied topography across the rest of Mordor. I also hadn't considered that Gollum would still be lurking about... I could definitely imagine a disreputable tavern in Stazmûlkrak using him as the image on their door-sign.
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